docs/handbook/bug_reports/making_good_bug_reports/macos_information.md

@@ -28,16 +28,16 @@ share it on your bug reporting form.
 
 ### Downloaded from Blender Website
 
-There are two main ways we recommend collecting Blender version.
+There are two main ways we recommend finding the Blender version.
 Through the command line, or through a GUI.
 
 #### Command Line
 
-Open a terminal and run the command `/path/to/blender --version`. In the output
+Open the terminal app and run the command `/path/to/blender --version`. In the output
 you will find the information we're interested in. They are Blender version,
 commit date, hash, and branch *(Blender 4.2+)*. Combine these details together
 and put them on your report form like this:
-`Blender 4.2.0 - branch: main - commit date: 2024-05-16 20:40 - hash: 1558bc7cb428`
+`Blender 4.2.0, branch: main, commit date: 2024-05-16 20:40. hash: 1558bc7cb428`
 
 The path to Blender is typically `/Applications/Blender.app/Contents/MacOS/Blender`
 
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ The path to Blender is typically `/Applications/Blender.app/Contents/MacOS/Blend
 
 #### GUI
 
-Navigate to where Blender is installed and right click on it and select `Get Info`.
+Navigate to where Blender is installed, right click on it, and select `Get Info`.
 You will find the Blender version number in the section `General > Version`. Share
 this information on your bug reporting form like this: `Blender 4.1.1 2024-04-16`
 
@@ -53,20 +53,21 @@ this information on your bug reporting form like this: `Blender 4.1.1 2024-04-16
 
 ### Downloaded from Steam
 
-There are two main ways we recommend collecting Blender version.
+There are two main ways we recommend finding the Blender version.
 Through the command line, or through a GUI.
 
 #### Command Line
 
-Open Steam, right click on Blender and select the option
+Open Steam, right click on Blender, and select the option
 `Manage > Browse local files`. Finder will open showing where
 Blender is installed. Right click on Blender and select `Show Package Contents`
 then navigate to the folder `/Contents/MacOS/`. Here you will find the Blender
-executable we want to run in a terminal with the `--version` launch argument.
+executable. Open the terminal app and run the command `/path/to/blender --version`,
-Like this: `/path/to/blender --version`. The output of the command will include the
+using the Blender executable found earlier. In the output you will find the
-Blender version, commit date, hash, and branch *(Blender 4.2+)*. Combine these
+information we're interested in. They are Blender version, commit date, hash,
-together and put them on your report form like this:
+and branch *(Blender 4.2+)*. Combine these details together
-`Blender 4.2.0 - branch: main - commit date: 2024-05-16 20:40 - hash: 1558bc7cb428`
+and put them on your report form like this:
+`Blender 4.2.0, branch: main, commit date: 2024-05-16 20:40, hash: 1558bc7cb428`
 
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